Dear customer, a noteworthy sentence

by 21cstories

Ever remember receiving letters in your email that start off like this:

bad writing sample

The very first sentence is a let down. ‘We are living in an era’ – makes me pause and ponder, and expect something serious to come next. And what follows is the plainest of plain truth. ‘Extremely’ – another place to stop and reflect on its depth of meaning. That first sentence should be framed and hung in public.

I don’t usually dissect content like I did above. Like most readers and writers, I just skip over them.

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